Metamorphosis
Live life as it is~Poem-lets?
I forgot the term for these. xD Hence, the weird name. My sincerest apologies.
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Looking at the smiling moon tonight,
the feeling has started to get redundant.
Seems as if life has taken a step back
in the passage of time or in my unsettled mind;
the ambiguity resoundingly strong
as I try to wade through the unending ocean
of ever-growing doubts and unkept promises.
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Short, huh? I’m hoping to get out some more of these stuff before going back to my usual style. It’s actually pretty refreshing to write something without putting in any thought or structure. :-)
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This one’s a… well, half-complete poem-let. I kinda didn’t get the time to complete it when I had the flow going for this and couldn’t really get the emotions to finish it off when I picked it up later.
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Walking down that familiar road,
I realise that nothing’s really changed.
Even though things are supposed to,
it’s still the simple ol’ shade of dreams.
Looking around, the buds and thorns
complement each other even now.
The trees sway and dance in their joy;
the droopy branches intimidating yet.
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Told ya it’s incomplete. Will complete it one of these days so will update accordingly.
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This could’ve been a very short poem as well. It’s kinda an other-side point of view to the ‘ Devil Inside You ‘.
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Conflicts and contradictions swim abound;
distracting emotions n’ feelings have taken backstage,
their nuances unknown to us, the ones.
The ones who have chosen to live midst this hell.
Things are no longer black n’ white
for hate and despair shadow all rationale.
There’s no hidden pain anymore,
with our faces glamorously painted.
Fearful whispers call it the devil’s abode;
that’s our hell of a world, oh yeah.
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Any better? This was the first thing I wrote about some completely dark emotions. It could’ve been due to the fact that I was a bit angry and frustrated in a no-where place with nothing-else-to-do when I wrote this. But then I liked the way it came out. So I wrote the counterpart to it, as I mentioned before, which I’m just gonna put up here in a few minutes.
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So this is for now. Got two other poems to type down as well, so will be moving on to that. Hopefully, I’ll be able to continue the creative streak for a while more ( before I get struck by the unavoidable writers’ block which is a very common occurence with me. >.< )
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I love many of ur ideas but i dont know why all of ur poems give me this feeling that the anime songs give me.. u tend 2 use complicated words as in ‘the ambiguity resoundingly strong as I try to wade through..’ Even if the message is nice it gets dilluted by using those words. and, as someone before me commented on one other poem.. sometimes there are just too many descriptions. still, I love the feeling and admire the originality of some verses.
Oh damn. that may have sounded too.. official? formal? sorry for that, I`m not english so when I write long speeches I get carried away.. XD
Uhm yeah, I had people point me out that particular problem before as well. Gotta do something about it! But I guess the problem here is that maybe I just *think* that much descriptively because they seem to sneak in whatever I write. >.> Maybe I should start making a conscious effort to keep them at bay.
Still, am glad you liked the ideas!^^ Thanks a lot for the review. And don’t worry about the language, lol… I’ve got english as a second language too. (: